Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Thursday, February 23, 2017

Storytelling Week 6:


They could see the horses coming from a distance.

How did they find us? Kai thought, his chest pounding. His mother had warned him that men would try to come for him. They had been hearing reports of the same happening recently. But they were so secluded, so far away that they had not thought to worry.

The men were too close now for Kai and his mother to escape. She put her hand on his shoulder and tried to smile. "It will be alright, Kai." The two went outside to meet the five men, soldiers, on horseback.

The soldier in the front waved his arm. "Greetings to you, ma'am and young man."

Kai's mother curtsied to the men. "An honor, sir. What brings you to us, so far from the city?"

The man smiled, a gruesome sight. "We have come to recruit your son. The king is in need of able-bodied, healthy young men to fight in his army. He has ordered every young man to join him."

"No," Kai said quickly.

The man's smile disappeared. "It was not a request, young man. You are to come with us, whether you wish to or not."

"Well I don't wish to," Kai retorted. "Besides, I cannot abandon my mother. I'm all she has."

The smile reappeared. "And I am sure you would not wish any harm to come to her. Come with us, and I can promise you your mother will be safe and you will be well taken care of." To reiterate his point, the man drew his sword slightly, allowing it to glint in the sun.

Kai clenched his jaw, but knew it was useless. "Very well, I will go with you."

"Good choice, boy. Say your goodbyes then."

Kai turned and hugged his mother. "Don't worry," she whispered. "Perhaps you'll become a great warrior." She pulled away and looked at him one last time. "We'll see each other one day, I promise. I love you, Kai."

Kai swallowed hard. "I love you too."

They stood there until the man finally said, "It's time to go, boy." Kai kissed his mother's hand before turning and going with the soldiers.

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Weeks past as Kai was forced to train to be a soldier for the king. Surprisingly, to himself and to the man who brought him, he became an extremely good swordsman and a fierce fighter. All the frustration he felt at being taken away led him to battle hard and to refuse to surrender. Soon it became apparent that he was ready for a real fight.

He was sent out to defend the borders against a neighboring country. Kai suddenly found himself in the midst of clashing swords and dead comrades. His heart was pounding in his head as he struggled to defend himself against enemy attacks.

Up, down his sword went, blocking soldiers' thrusts at him. All Kai wanted was to defend himself, but he soon found it difficult to continue to defend when he was surrounded. He thrusted his own sword and soon drew blood, killing his opponent who was too slow to block the blow. Time seemed to slow as Kai realized he had just killed a man. He hardly had time to feel sick, as suddenly more enemy soldiers attacked. Kai fought well, and killed many, whether he wished to or not.

Eventually, after hours of fighting, Kai spotted the leader of the enemy country. If he dies, perhaps his soldiers will lose their courage and fall back, Kai thought to himself. Somehow, he must to get closer to the leader.

As he fought his way closer, he noticed bows and arrows lying on the ground next to their dead owners. An idea formed. Fighting the urge to vomit, Kai quickly grabbed a bow and a handful of arrows. While training, Kai had learned how to shoot a bow, although he was not as proficient with it as with a sword. He began to move back, away from the frontline. He would only have a short time to shoot at the king before he himself was attacked.

Notching an arrow and raising the bow, Kai quickly aimed at the king. He focused on the neck, which the king had carelessly, or perhaps arrogantly, neglected to cover. He's so far away. Still, Kai breathed in, took his aim, breathed out, and released the arrow. 





It was not a perfect shot, but it hit its target and the king fell over in response. The enemy soldiers quickly realized their king was taken down, possibly dead. Kai and his fellow soldiers grew in confidence and forced the enemy forward. Quickly, with the king gone, they won that battle.

Soldiers clasped their hands on Kai's shoulders, congratulating him. He was soon brought to the king and declared a hero.

"Well done, sir," the king smiled at Kai. "It is because of you I hear that we have victory. Anything you wish for, if is within my power, will be granted to you."

Kai looked down. "Your majesty, though I am proud to have served you, I did not come willingly. I was forcibly taken from my home to come fight in your army. I want nothing more than to go home."

The king studied Kai. "I was not aware I was forcibly abducting youths for my army. Go home, young man. I will make certain no man disturbs you again."

Still, the king did not send Kai away empty-handed, but gave him enough gold to allow him to live comfortably for the rest of his days. Kai decided it was time he and his mother reentered society, and so with some of the gold he bought a home in the city, for he and his mother. 

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Kai traveled back to his home to see his mother. He could feel that things were different, he was different. But one thing that still remained was his love for his mother. When he made it to his house, he knocked on the door and there appeared him mother. She cried and hugged Kai, and soon returned to the city with him. Throughout the city, Kai was regarded as a hero, whether he meant to be or not.



Author's Note: I got inspiration from Ozaki's tale of Kintaro, the Golden Boy. Kintaro is an extremely strong young boy who eventually is discovered by servant of Lord Raiko. The servant recruits Kintaro to become a samurai in the lord's army. Kintaro is of course very excited and willingly goes with him to become a samurai. Through reading this, I had the idea that what if Kintaro had not gone willingly, but had been forced to become a soldier. I decided to write about this. Since I do not know much about Japanese culture, I decided to write the setting ambiguously. Kintaro, or Kai, becomes a soldier who eventually becomes a great hero and then moves his mother to the city. I liked these elements so I decided to keep them while changing the details. I ran out of words, so some of the parts are not as descriptive as I would have liked. Hopefully is is still good.   

Bibliography: This is a retelling of the story of "The Adventures of Kintaro" from Japanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki. From the unit Ozaki

Image information: "Rodwewald Wooden House and Bunker" by Philip Graham, 2012. Web source: Wikipedia
Image information: "Arrow Flight" posted on Trinity Lutheran Church's website, 2015. Web source: Trinity Memphis  

Monday, February 20, 2017

Reading Notes: Ozaki's Japanese Fairy Tales, Part B

Continuing with Ozaki's fairy tales, the story of the Goblin of Adachigahara is very odd. I didn't completely understand the old goblin woman and why she was reluctant to house the priest or why she kept him alive for so long if she all she wanted to do was to eat him. It was an interesting story, and certainly suspenseful, but didn't make a whole lot of sense. Perhaps the old woman did not want to eat him initially, or sometime to that affect. It would be interesting to try to write a story in favor of the old woman.
The story of the Orge of Rashomon is so strange. What is with people portraying old women as monsters in disguise? I wonder where this idea came from. It would be something cool to write about.
The story of Princess Hase is beginning to sound like Cinderella. How tragic that Hase lost her mother at such a young age, but I love that she remained kind. That has always been my favorite thing about Cinderella. It is horrible that the stepmother killed her own child be accident. Yes, it was her own fault, but it is still sad. This story is also quite like the story of Snow White when the man refuses to kill the princess and she hides out in the woods. I think it is horrible that despite having all the esteem and doing such amazing things, Hase is forced to live in hiding because of her jealous stepmother. I am so glad for the ending, since I love happy endings. It wrapped up the story nicely. I enjoyed this story and think it would be fun to write a story of my own like this, although I am not sure exactly of the details just yet. 

All in all, Ozaki's fairy tales, while extremely odd, were a very good source of inspiration.



Japanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki. Source link: Part B
Image information: "Chujo-hime" by 
 Yoshitoshi, 1881. Web source: Wikipedia

Reading Notes: Ozaki's Japanese Fairy Tales, Part A

For this week's reading, I chose to read Ozaki's Japanese fairy tales. The story of My Lord Bag of Rice is an interesting one. I like Hidesato and how he seeks out adventure. I also admire his courage, because if I had seen a huge dragon in front of me, I might have ran for it. I really like the description of the palace in the lake. I would love to expand on it and create a world with it. I think it's awesome that Hidesato used his brain in order to kill the centipede. I really like how this story explained how Hidesato got his title. It is always interesting to learn the origins of a name, and I could see myself writing a story about this concept.
The Adventures of Kintaro, The Golden Boy is really fascinating. So many stories I have found contain children who have remarkable strength. It is also interesting how the animals are wrestling each other. I think that this could be a cool story. This was a great story for a hero, a humble one to say the least. I like how Kintaro was able to become a samurai. I think it would be interesting to write a story of a general looking for boys to train, but instead of taking them willingly, he takes them by force. 



The Man Who Did not Wish to Die is an interesting story. I think it resonates with a lot of people who are scared to die. I was hoping the author would mention how living forever can be a really bad thing, and he did. Living forever sounds dreadfully boring, and I like that the author realized this. I could write a story about a people who never die, but want to. There was also a great deal of suspense in the story, which I enjoyed. I'm glad in the end Sentaro learned to be content with the time he is given.

Japanese Fairy Tales by Yei Theodora Ozaki. Source link: Part A
Image information: Ozaki's Japanese Fairy Book by Kakuzo Fujiyama, 1908. Web source: Wikimedia Commons